How about - They don't know eachother
he works the nightshift
and she takes classes all day
here's the thing:
they both share the same room
sleep in the same bed - it works out cheaper that way
Well I've a feeling you're just kidding
But to me it sounds believable
Makes a better opening, than that carchase scene
Girl finds boy borrowing her toothbrush
or oversleeping
or at her sewing machine
[spoken dialog]
Back to work
What if he's a teacher?
Where does that get us?
Don't see what good that would do
No it's great!
If they do the same job
so much in common - they'd fall in love
wouldn't you?
Yes, but if he's just a teacher
Then we lose those scenes in the factory
Not if he's a champion for the working man
Girl likes boy
she respects his talent
working with someone - can turn you into a fan
this is fun - writing, with a parther
This time it could be
One helluva movie
Can we really do it?
I know that we can
he works the nightshift
and she takes classes all day
here's the thing:
they both share the same room
sleep in the same bed - it works out cheaper that way
Well I've a feeling you're just kidding
But to me it sounds believable
Makes a better opening, than that carchase scene
Girl finds boy borrowing her toothbrush
or oversleeping
or at her sewing machine
[spoken dialog]
Back to work
What if he's a teacher?
Where does that get us?
Don't see what good that would do
No it's great!
If they do the same job
so much in common - they'd fall in love
wouldn't you?
Yes, but if he's just a teacher
Then we lose those scenes in the factory
Not if he's a champion for the working man
Girl likes boy
she respects his talent
working with someone - can turn you into a fan
this is fun - writing, with a parther
This time it could be
One helluva movie
Can we really do it?
I know that we can